ghostrek Posted February 11, 2018 Author Posted February 11, 2018 1 minute ago, bnmjy said: how many hours of sleep do you normally get? 5-8 is about rigth
SwimModSponges Posted February 11, 2018 Posted February 11, 2018 Five to eight is quite a spread. Go to bed the same time every day, get up the same time every day. Sleep hygiene is very important. Are you sure to sleep in a dark room without distraction? Do you stop looking at bright screens at least half an hour before sleep? Have you read my fanfictions yet? 1
fuggnificent Posted February 11, 2018 Posted February 11, 2018 start working out, drink more water and take vitamins
ghostrek Posted February 11, 2018 Author Posted February 11, 2018 11 minutes ago, SwimModSponges said: Five to eight is quite a spread. Go to bed the same time every day, get up the same time every day. Sleep hygiene is very important. Are you sure to sleep in a dark room without distraction? Do you stop looking at bright screens at least half an hour before sleep? Have you read my fanfictions yet? i like sleeping with the the tv on
ghostrek Posted February 11, 2018 Author Posted February 11, 2018 1 minute ago, StarPanda said: Let party instead no
SwimModSponges Posted February 11, 2018 Posted February 11, 2018 Well knock that shit right the fuck off right away. That shit fucks with your brain, man. Also read my goddamn fanfiction. You have a guilty conscience because you haven't.
Doom Metal Alchemist Posted February 12, 2018 Posted February 12, 2018 Sponges is right, nothing will put you to sleep like reading his fanfictions. 1 3
SwimModSponges Posted February 12, 2018 Posted February 12, 2018 You're only allowed to critique me if you've actually read the stories. If you have, please critique me. I'm begging for more feedback. The few bits of it I've gotten back so far have been overwhelmingly positive.
Doom Metal Alchemist Posted February 12, 2018 Posted February 12, 2018 Just now, SwimModSponges said: You're only allowed to critique me if you've actually read the stories. If you have, please critique me. I'm begging for more feedback. The few bits of it I've gotten back so far have been overwhelmingly positive. I was just being an ass. You totally set yourself up for it. 1
bnmjy Posted February 12, 2018 Posted February 12, 2018 13 hours ago, SwimModSponges said: You're only allowed to critique me if you've actually read the stories. If you have, please critique me. I'm begging for more feedback. The few bits of it I've gotten back so far have been overwhelmingly positive. I did give honest feedback after reading the first few chapters, and it wasn't positive. Despite many fanfiction authors frequently committing canon rape, I prefer boundaries being established. You make it clear anything is possible, and with the many universes trope thrown in, without consequence. That's boring. 1
SwimModSponges Posted February 12, 2018 Posted February 12, 2018 (edited) I can see how one would get the impression that the entirety of the story is essentially myself playing with action figures. It's still fun though, and I have gotten at least some positive feedback, that I'm pretty sure I didn't imagine. Edited February 12, 2018 by SwimModSponges
bnmjy Posted February 12, 2018 Posted February 12, 2018 It's only my opinion after all. I'm sure there were others who did enjoy it. 1
SwimModSponges Posted February 12, 2018 Posted February 12, 2018 I would like to know exactly how far you got, as well a critiques of the other facets of the writing, besides the entirety of the premise being ridiculous.
bnmjy Posted February 12, 2018 Posted February 12, 2018 3 minutes ago, SwimModSponges said: I would like to know exactly how far you got, as well a critiques of the other facets of the writing, besides the entirety of the premise being ridiculous. It was at least a year ago when I read it. The story had a nice flow, which I think is the most important aspect of objective writing critique. I think I stopped after five chapters. What stands out is the one guy tricking Xavier and saying something along the lines of the multiverse theory. My original review should still be up somewhere here, I think. It's really not worth finding.
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