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SwimModSponges

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  1. must have been fairly recent as i havent seen it before, and Dean has black hair dye like he did in.... the last season of VB? Maybe the one before that?
  2. Epic Crossover by AEHentai and Slappyfrog. Dean Venture ploqing through Velma, Tali, Harley Quinn, Cammy, Lana, Leela, Rogue, Princess Peach... it just kept going. highly rated and recommended.
  3. I have a pleasure room.
  4. Mine represents the lies I bear.
  5. Wisconsin: circle jerks. Circle-Jerking Wisconsinites. Bet they do it out in the snow too. There's an uncomfortable mental image for you.
  6. Because I am able to harness the emotions of those around me. I'm like an airbender only better.
  7. 1. Actual meat- can't be beat 2. Frozen meat- like chicken strips and stuff 3. Hot dogs and deli meat- It's not the best, but it's protein 4. Canned meat products- I'm going to include the meat in canned soup in here too, because I this is my list and I make the rules.
  8. No but I did mention it, so I still get points for that.
  9. Totally did happen, and today in an all-day interview thing with a bunch of the higher ups in the company, I'm pretty sure I got at least one of them to cry too. I'm a goddamn inspiration.
  10. I've got a room filled with infinite monkeys on infinite keyboards hitting buttons randomly. Whenever I want a reply, I just reach in and grab one. So far I've been extremely luckyiouwhpagbuwvaguw hgfwe hpewP uhwe HW9EEHW hfwpe HNs PHHPI Af PEFHh ipFE phEF ghsi P;hgisw PHGW [hef {[ hEgweh [ hejwh
  11. Pretty sure I've got a promotion in the future.
  12. They needed to redo like half that movie because test audiences were absolutely certain he would turn out to be a serial killer.
  13. I need to get all m blitzball players at max level.
  14. I was considering picking up FFX for cheap, but I'm worried I wouldn't have time to play it. Ark, Sims 3, Skyrim SE.
  15. I've never even seen one.
  16. Yo mamma's labia so old and saggy they remind one of the ears of an elephant. And not the water-loving Indian elephant, the dusty African elephant.
  17. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OKWy8wHQrnE
  18. Theme or message- 2.5 points. You stick to one idea fairly well- the doll being possessed. It gets muddled as to whether the doll was possessed in the beginning or not, but on the whole it doesn't really matter: very simple story structure- Abused kid dies, mom wants revenge, goes to voodoo lady who puts kid into doll, end. Revenge theme does not get explored at all Plot, setting, etc- 2 points. Plot goes nowhere, very few details, those that are there seem unnecessary. No real suspense or action, dialogue is mediocre at best. Organization- 2 points. No real closure to the story, Ric said it best: "I know the main point of the story is the doll possession but it ends abruptly and the whole revenge plot went nowhere, as did the possibility of the doll being supernatural beforehand." Language and style- 2 points. Vocabulary needs work, sentence structure is often confusing, random switches between past and present tenses, first and third person, tone needs a lot of work. Conventions- 1 point, but you specifically said to disregard this aspect of the story, so there we are.
  19. I think you have to add the content warning, otherwise it won't let you post the story. It's a flaw in the system.
  20. They also need to remake BattleZone 2, combat commander. Kind of a stupid name, but man, awesome game.
  21. Steam's summer sale is going on right now too. Sims 3 expansion packs for $4.99. Skipped buying lunch a few days in a row to jusify spending the money.
  22. I'll see what I can do, I've been mighty busy as of late.
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