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PhilosipherStoned

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  1. I hate that. I just started back again and the soreness is sticking around a bit too long.
  2. I just havent really had the time for a standard novel lately let alone a sponges novel. If you didn't have to make Storm and Rogue actually enjoy the dinosaur penis and go looking for more I might've finished XvAVP when I sat down to read it with nothing better to do. Also I believe you can lay out a scene without using 10 adjectives a sentence. Most novelist do because their editors would make them edit uneccesary adjectives to make the story a more clear concise read.
  3. enjoy.
  4. I've gotta be an early bird on Tuesdays most the time so I'm about done.
  5. I read the XMen V.S Alien v.s Pedator fanfic and I loved the way you pulled off your pornographic shift in that one.. It seemed the most believable of all of them since you took the role of god, and more or less made it happen to to impress deadpool. That being said it semed like you drug the pornographic bit out a little too long, and the story as a whole kind of looses it's value. I'm not very big on porno in general though so that could be why I lose interest to be honest. I had to edit to correct the name of one I actually read.. I may need to read through that one again because the last part I remember was the part where storm and rogue were getting dinosaur action. That's why I assumed it was the Jurassic World crossover. Your "double digit number adjectives in one sentence" style helps to create an actual visual scene in my head while I'm reading your writing, but it makes it more challenging to actually remember and critique for sure.
  6. Holy shit this verse is gonna have a hard landing.. I could've stopped at sixteen bars but since this was engineered for this here crazy ass beat I had to drag it out to 20. My polysyllabic rhyme scheme made it hard to switch up the vowel sounds and keep the rhyme fresh, but I think I might've finally finished versed one with some good word play, and some nice trick shots against the vocal samples that are already on the beat.
  7. fair enough. I was just joking anyway. Sounds like you were talking about a junk email/
  8. sounds very electrifying.
  9. @katt_goddess you actually live in Alaska? I think I remember you mentioning that before not sure. I know the north/NE can get down pretty low as well.
  10. I smoke cigs when I'm stressed and increase frequency...atleast your coping mechanism is a bit more healthy.
  11. It's been a while since I had to deal with negatives, but it got down to zero here a few weeks ago without factoring in wind chill. If all I had to do was walk home in the crap I could cope, but if I want to get work done I have to fool with frigid metal, and climb up to where it's even colder. I watched it go from freezing rain to a bit of snow earlier, and it's going to drop pretty close to zero here (without wind chill) in the next few hours.
  12. Do you bite your nails even when they are clipped down to the end of your finger? I would just clip the shit. I hate long finger nails especially women with false or long ass decorated fingernails.
  13. Atleast I dodged the freezing rain taking care of other semantics..
  14. I bet you didn't use a faulty extension ladder to climb 24 feet in the air and hang from a pole in unstable west texas winds though.
  15. Working outside sucked about as much as I thought it would, on top of that I just found out I lost my registration paperwork for my work truck and my company requires new registration and proof of insurance snapshots annually. The deadline was today..Also apparently the tax bill I got for my house was sent out due to a glitch so I just got through depositing an official check for over a grand back into my bank account.
  16. What if they werent robots and you just passed up hot sexy singles in your area looking for a booty call?
  17. Riiight..
  18. That sounds like a personal problem..
  19. No allow me to clarify my point for the two squares that have the time to be so freaking tedious on this forum. All I did was agree with someone that stated scientific facts involving the consumption of alcohol, and added a few statements myself about the statistics of alcohol related deaths. Then pail gets on a pedastal and assumes I give a fuck about whether it's legal or not. (which I don't). My point was for someone that was constantly posting about drinking and doing drugs to even take such a position is laughable, and it sounds like pail is turning into a freaking preaching dry drunk. Whether or not anyone agrees with the statement makes no difference to me. GFY
  20. TURN DOWN FOR WHAT!!!
  21. I've heard them first hand. They are pretty turnt up.
  22. Lol Bucket. You were bragging about getting drunk and doing drugs not more than a year ago. Take yourself to the "dry drunk" thread and do some research.
  23. I miss my jumping spider friend.. I accidentally made him go splat. These guys are local..smart as hell and fun to watch hunt.
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