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SwimModSponges

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  1. I've heard all of those puns before. Original material only.
  2. He though maybe it has something to do with the overgrown patch of rye the fence passed through. Turns out it wasn't the rye tangle.
  3. It's not for me; I'm just concerned about alcohol conservation for the future. We as a species could save so much alcohol if we drank it with our butts/noses/arms.
  4. Hey now, if its good enough for a supreme court justice its good enough for me.
  5. Back in the day, first nations people smoked tobacco through their noses. It was way more potent, apparently.
  6. I will practice every day and hopefully be able to do something of approximate quality.
  7. https://www.npr.org/sections/goatsandsoda/2018/12/22/677795748/menstruating-women-are-blocked-from-temple-in-video-game-and-in-real-life
  8. That's beautiful.
  9. You're on. I'll let you pick a drawing prompt, we spend a bit drawing, and see who wins.
  10. More people should "drink" that way- it would conserve alcohol.
  11. Celebrate that shit.
  12. I AM THE GODHEAD OF THE UNIVERSE
  13. I don't know of any. I have been watching this lately though- it's mind blowing.
  14. FOR YOURS IS THE ETERNAL GODHEAD. BEHOLD THE SPHERE OF YOUR INFLUENCE: BEHOLD ALL.
  15. I read ghostrek's first 4 chapters and posted a review. He got a C.
  16. My review of @ghosrek's fanfiction- chapters 1-4: I will be using this rubric. Attention: I'll give you a B-. We see that Kagome is very hostile, and the reader may feel some draw to figure out what caused this anger. However the reader could easily interpret this anger as a simple personality facet, which really lessens the impact. Originality: C+. Plot is just a christmas carol, however the cast of characters and their interactions are... relatively speaking original in this context. Cliches though, you struggle with. From Kagome getting mad at InuYasha for turning up the heat, to SPOILER ALERT kagome's christmas miscarriage... The out of body experience while having a heart attack also sounds similar to a plot point in last season's Venture Bros finale. The imagery of godzilla singing christmas carols, the dialogue during that scene, and the ghost part (assuming the out of body experience line wasn't lifted) were highlights Interest: I'll give you another C+ here. The crux of the problem is, the same as it was in the original christmas carol. the shock of revisiting painful memories does have an effect on Kagome's character, though it could definitely use to be expounded upon more thoroughly. Clarity: C-. I was very confused when Kagome and godzilla were discussing their business. I feel like if there were more backstory the story would be improved. Mechanics: D. All told, solid C thus far.
  17. Always assume best intentions.
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