PhilosipherStoned

On @SwimModSponges I would've judged you higher, but I've gotten used to descriptive world building with writing. If you remember I think I gave your last submission the highest score out of that batch. That was my creative writing teacher's main focus though. Aside from talking about the actual aspects of making it as a writer... Of course you are also supposed to keep the story concise and fluent at the same time you paint your picture right? Idk.. The shit hand man could've had more of a 'slender man' feel or something at least though I think. The character just didn't stick in my mind as well as it seemed you wanted it to since there's so little descriptions of everything. At least everybody else liked your character though right? *The scene that happened at the factory was pretty hard hitting it just seemed rushed. It was done pretty well It's just I wasn't able to insert myself into that situation again as well as you seemed to hope. I think it would've been way better if you built a protagonist to experience all this rather than take the angle that I the reader am in fact going through all of this. Again I have to say I regret not giving you at least a few more points for originality, and using such a creative point of view for everything. I was trying to put on my teacher's hat though lol. My score on it was only so low because it seemed like a basic outline or roughdraft as opposed to a solid immersive short story. There was a lot of good shit there still.. I probably would've given you those extra points if I thought about it a little more.

It should all melt through out the week now I hope. The high's are only getting in the 40's though.

I think there's a lot of Ben Shapiro fan boys in the military. Not sure if by camo guy you are just refrring to some dude that wears camo though..

What makes it bad is it waits until like 3am or later to do this usually so people wake up and freak out. I had looked at the weather, and was up late hanging out with a friend like right before the snow came. It came with a lot of freezing rain that lasted like the whole day until it finally snowed. I guess we dodged it all when we were out, but I didn't even really go outside until the snow started thawing out a bit today lol.

Here in Northern Texas anyway. School was cancelled and everybody was calling into work that could afford it lol. It wasn't bad though just like maybe a foot of snow, and 30 degree weather.

It started out with the footage though..

Prolly

Meh Imma spaz..

Going to check my system

Just one more time I had the source..

I will find it.

My god I fucked up ther, but plz...... Someone post me what is inbetween that shit ///

I googled Joker vid compilation or something like that tf.. hold on..

Some of that shit wa like what/

Ok I just fucking anxious fingered a lot of things, but the source I want exists... I think it was a russian fuck americans type propaganda type vid in retroflect, BUT I AM TRYING TO BE HONEST .

....

Shit anymore bullshit he's right. Wear that bullshit crown I wasn't goin' for it.

Who gives a fuck... Isn't that the niche? Play it Exodia.... Where the fuck are you at existentially if you honestly believe I give a fuck?? My god arent you like 50 years old or some shit.. I'm not gonna rag on that... but for YOU LOL.

Yep.. So much look... Hold on let me watch....

WTF. I found some wierd ass shit .. Not sure how I even got the link.

Meh. You know he won't. so Neko Sama to the rescue? How Kawaii... Fuck.

Lol It cost me five fucking dollars on my whole build when I bought it and the back light was faint out of the box. You are shitty for telling another person what to do with their keyboard honestly. I might jizz on this bitch just to prove my point. Wait. I would never do that... shit/🤐

Ha... Yes quality UEMB content.. Teach me the way!!

I forgot the most important one... Maybe? 🤘

I'll stop though. What's the thread topic enlighten me? Oh right @Doom Metal Alchemist Everyone seems to think they are a boss now because you made an 'insecure' thread. WELL PLAYED MY MAN! 👆👉✌️🖖👍