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So it was humans and swallows specifically.  I still think the birds were a test though, since one was found before the event.  I certainly don't think it was a natural phenomenon.

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Just now, ben0119 said:

So it was humans and swallows specifically.  I still think the birds were a test though, since one was found before the event.  I certainly don't think it was a natural phenomenon.

What about Dolphins?

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1 minute ago, elfie said:

..... this is great n all, but wouldn't it have killed the author to put all this AT THE BEGINNING of the story so it wouldn't be a flashback?

it wouldn't have gotten us into the action soon enough and would dampen the suprise/suspense balance of these goings-on now. it's not asspull writing; it's careful emotional manipulation of the reader.

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