Well, I have to congratulate you - I was invested enough in Harrison to want to keep following and eventually see him resolve his grief ( or not). That's got to be hard to do in such a short piece.
Respect the language, dammit.
Zeni's schtick is creepy and, as he ages, becomes creepier. However, he meets neither the legal nor the diagnostic criteria for a pedophile. He, or at least the character he inflicts on us, is an ephebophile.
I can't think of any bills you could do that to in American currency. But if I was still living up near the border, it'd be tempting to have a couple of those in my wallet.
It makes for a very tasty cheese sauce.
What exactly is tomato gravy? The only time I ever heard about making it was from a friend who used to dump a can of tomatoes into the pan she tried ham in and cooking it down.
I usually make it with butter for mac and cheese, and it's always sticky, but this was for a roasted cauliflower and bacon casserole - it called for using the bacon grease, and damn...the last time I made anything that was so persistent was when I forgot to grease the pan when I made brownies. I was just curious as to whether anybody else had run into this.
There have been a lot of female singers and female groups in the last 50 years.
Exactly what are you looking for? You mean like church choirs or school singing groups or pop groups? And how young? Remember, I'm old, and a pop group where the members are in their late teens/early 20's are kids to me.