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But couldn't focused at all! I mean had all the paperwork, lying there in front of me, and the brain was like, thinking is hard to focus. 

So now I took an edible and drinking alcohol. It's due Friday, I'll just procrastinate to think better I suppose. I was thinking about talking about the Private prison industry. It's for Communications 1A, public speaking. I hate public speaking.

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48 minutes ago, jackiemarie90 said:

But couldn't focused at all! I mean had all the paperwork, lying there in front of me, and the brain was like, thinking is hard to focus. 

So now I took an edible and drinking alcohol. It's due Friday, I'll just procrastinate to think better I suppose. I was thinking about talking about the Private prison industry. It's for Communications 1A, public speaking. I hate public speaking.

you got plenty of time! B|

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6 minutes ago, Distortedreasoning said:

you got plenty of time! B|

I dun wanna. But the teacher said she would grade easier the people who went first. Alright here is what I got, "Why is like, the U.S. have the highest prison population than anywhere in the U.S? Hmmmmmmmm?"

Idk >.> I usually can produce a good paper but speaking out loud is something I am quite terrible at. lol 

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10 minutes ago, Distortedreasoning said:

you dont look like someone that would be terrible at speeches but i'll take your word for it :P

 

that speech could easily go on for hours though the short answer for that is capitalism and racism. 

 

I did not consider the blatant racism of it. I was considering a section, who it affects, and the reason why it means anything to me cause I know this industry is going to prey on immigrants the most. Especially now that the some court recently said they can detain immigrants indefinitely without lawyers and rights. It makes me so angry for people to ignore such blatant acts against freedom, that the U.S. truly doesn't consider others human beings and all that. I think I need need five sections the most, so far all I could think is, What the private prison industry is, and who it affects.

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3 minutes ago, jackiemarie90 said:

I did not consider the blatant racism of it. I was considering a section, who it affects, and the reason why it means anything to me cause I know this industry is going to prey on immigrants the most. Especially now that the some court recently said they can detain immigrants indefinitely without lawyers and rights. It makes me so angry for people to ignore such blatant acts against freedom, that the U.S. truly doesn't consider others human beings and all that. I think I need need five sections the most, so far all I could think is, What the private prison industry is, and who it affects.

did your teacher set the topic or are you allowed to choose your own?

If you can pick your own just write about Bioshock

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2 minutes ago, molarbear said:

did your teacher set the topic or are you allowed to choose your own?

If you can pick your own just write about Bioshock

There are some rules. It's supposed to be an informative speech, so we have to "inform" people about something. She also used people passions as a bad example, stating that a student once talked about hello kitty and she didn't grade them well. Kinda has to somewhat relatable to our audience I suppose. She did say she liked my idea though. 

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11 minutes ago, jackiemarie90 said:

There are some rules. It's supposed to be an informative speech, so we have to "inform" people about something. She also used people passions as a bad example, stating that a student once talked about hello kitty and she didn't grade them well. Kinda has to somewhat relatable to our audience I suppose. She did say she liked my idea though. 

I got this!  Make it about the over fishing of our Oceans and tell her that you wrote it in a sense that you're explaining it to the fish and to further push the argument you wrote it in Fish, then just stand there silently for 5 mins.  

If I was a teacher and a student did that I would laugh my ass off and give them at least a B

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3 minutes ago, jackiemarie90 said:

I did not consider the blatant racism of it. I was considering a section, who it affects, and the reason why it means anything to me cause I know this industry is going to prey on immigrants the most. Especially now that the some court recently said they can detain immigrants indefinitely without lawyers and rights. It makes me so angry for people to ignore such blatant acts against freedom, that the U.S. truly doesn't consider others human beings and all that. I think I need need five sections the most, so far all I could think is, What the private prison industry is, and who it affects.

 

yeah you gotta consider the racist aspects to really get this down. the best place to start would be in the 70s since that was the start of the heavy incline of the prison population. then go to the 90s when politicians started to get "tough on crime" as a political platform. the increase immigrant population is pretty much happened as a result of those policies sticking around. then maybe a segment on how police marginalized both the poor and people of color. really so much to cover on the topic so try to keep it focused. 

immigration detention has been around for quite a while but it really exploded during the obama years. that was more of a result of them needing a scapegoat to why everything was going to shit. of course they blamed immigrants so that white people could focus their problems on them and not the politicians that made those conditions happen. 

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10 minutes ago, molarbear said:

I got this!  Make it about the over fishing of our Oceans and tell her that you wrote it in a sense that you're explaining it to the fish and to further push the argument you wrote it in Fish, then just stand there silently for 5 mins.  

If I was a teacher and a student did that I would laugh my ass off and give them at least a B

But I wanna A. =| I want to go to Uni.

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1 hour ago, jackiemarie90 said:

 She also used people passions as a bad example, stating that a student once talked about hello kitty and she didn't grade them well. 

That's too bad. I don't know if your Comm 1A class is the very rudimentary one, like my Comm 3 was. Our teacher actually encouraged us to pick really easy topics. I did one speech about my Ozzy hat, one speech about the band Rainbow... I can't remember what my other speech was about. Maybe the info being presented wasn't important to anybody, but before I took that class I was deathly nervous about presenting in class, and after that class presenting in other classes was cake. Presenting easy shit gets you comfortable talking in front of a crowd which is a very valuable skill to have. I really think that was really the only goal of that Comm 3 class that I took, but it's a very valuable one imo.

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11 hours ago, jackiemarie90 said:

But couldn't focused at all! I mean had all the paperwork, lying there in front of me, and the brain was like, thinking is hard to focus. 

So now I took an edible and drinking alcohol. It's due Friday, I'll just procrastinate to think better I suppose. I was thinking about talking about the Private prison industry. It's for Communications 1A, public speaking. I hate public speaking.

I took that fucking class on line. All my speeches were about animals xD

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14 hours ago, jackiemarie90 said:

But couldn't focused at all! I mean had all the paperwork, lying there in front of me, and the brain was like, thinking is hard to focus. 

So now I took an edible and drinking alcohol. It's due Friday, I'll just procrastinate to think better I suppose. I was thinking about talking about the Private prison industry. It's for Communications 1A, public speaking. I hate public speaking.

in my five minute speech o taught abut 10 people to say nyhongo ga skoshi wakatimas, and why the sentence is grammatically structured that way

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