SwimModSponges

Back in the day, first nations people smoked tobacco through their noses. It was way more potent, apparently.

Coffee.

I will practice every day and hopefully be able to do something of approximate quality.

https://www.npr.org/sections/goatsandsoda/2018/12/22/677795748/menstruating-women-are-blocked-from-temple-in-video-game-and-in-real-life

That's beautiful.

Also, this-

done

A lamp.

You're on. I'll let you pick a drawing prompt, we spend a bit drawing, and see who wins.

More people should "drink" that way- it would conserve alcohol.

Just wondering.

Celebrate that shit.

I AM THE GODHEAD OF THE UNIVERSE

I don't know of any. I have been watching this lately though- it's mind blowing.

FOR YOURS IS THE ETERNAL GODHEAD. BEHOLD THE SPHERE OF YOUR INFLUENCE: BEHOLD ALL.

I read ghostrek's first 4 chapters and posted a review. He got a C.

My review of @ghosrek's fanfiction- chapters 1-4: I will be using this rubric. Attention: I'll give you a B-. We see that Kagome is very hostile, and the reader may feel some draw to figure out what caused this anger. However the reader could easily interpret this anger as a simple personality facet, which really lessens the impact. Originality: C+. Plot is just a christmas carol, however the cast of characters and their interactions are... relatively speaking original in this context. Cliches though, you struggle with. From Kagome getting mad at InuYasha for turning up the heat, to SPOILER ALERT kagome's christmas miscarriage... The out of body experience while having a heart attack also sounds similar to a plot point in last season's Venture Bros finale. The imagery of godzilla singing christmas carols, the dialogue during that scene, and the ghost part (assuming the out of body experience line wasn't lifted) were highlights Interest: I'll give you another C+ here. The crux of the problem is, the same as it was in the original christmas carol. the shock of revisiting painful memories does have an effect on Kagome's character, though it could definitely use to be expounded upon more thoroughly. Clarity: C-. I was very confused when Kagome and godzilla were discussing their business. I feel like if there were more backstory the story would be improved. Mechanics: D. All told, solid C thus far.

Always assume best intentions.

@bnmjy and @PokeNirvash though I appreciate your enthusiasm for @ghostrek's work I would ask that out of respect for the author all comments, criticism, etc be reserved for this topic so that the story thread is able to continue uninterrupted. @Admin_Raptorpat could you do my a solid and move the posts from ghostrek's fanfiction thread into this thread; unless I'm being a pedantic bitch in which case whatever.

I will review chapter by chapter.

This is fun.

But although, to be perfectly honest, there potentially exists a fun and challenging sort of endeavor I could perhaps create form it: that is, in sum, a valiant attempt at creating within that particular thread, a painstakingly crafted run-on-sentence of such verbosity that all who see it- nay, all who experience the amplitude of its incredibly enormous length will, in time, come to realize that this was all a diversion and while you were reading this sentence I stole your wallet. What is that, like, 90 some words? Fun.

@ghostrek where them fanfictions at?