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I wrote a Deja Vu themed short story


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Imagine if it was a tv show. Well this could be an episode. If u remember this character, she was supposed to be in an abusive relationship and basically is saved from it by this dude who shows her real love blah blah...

This "episode" takes place while theyre in highschool and kind of mentions the abusive boyfriend as an afterthought.

Im not posting it...too many haters..but if u would like to read it and are capable of a levelheaded critique...i think i can post it here password protected? 

Or ill just pm it to u.

Thanks in Advance! 

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1 minute ago, fuggstop said:

Imagine if it was a tv show. Well this could be an episode. If u remember this character, she was supposed to be in an abusive relationship and basically is saved from it by this dude who shows her real love blah blah...

This "episode" takes place while theyre in highschool and kind of mentions the abusive boyfriend as an afterthought.

Im not posting it...too many haters..but if u would like to read it and are capable of a levelheaded critique...i think i can post it here password protected? 

Or ill just pm it to u.

Thanks in Advance! 

Is she still hanging from the ceiling?

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4 minutes ago, scoobdog said:

Answer the question!

Ive seen sex dungeons where people hang from the wall...your wish she knew it all bookworm untouched by man virgin was completely unironically incorrect with the things she said. You can very much safely hang a person from the ceiling.

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1 minute ago, fuggstop said:

Ive seen sex dungeons where people hang from the wall...your wish she knew it all bookworm untouched by man virgin was completely unironically incorrect with the things she said. You can very much safely hang a person from the ceiling.

No idea what you said, so I'm just going to assume "Yes, Deja is still hanging from the ceiling."

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