fuggstop Posted November 6, 2018 Posted November 6, 2018 (edited) On the toilet, as i snooze Again the coffee has made me poop Hoping no one hears me shoot On my lunch but cant get no food Stupid coffee, im its fool Lord make it easy, make it loose So i wont get back late too! Edited November 6, 2018 by fuggstop 1
mumbo Posted November 6, 2018 Posted November 6, 2018 i mean im always praying, but on the toilet it would be a little more discreet... anyway you and the Lord have a shitty relationship., thats okay with me 1
mumbo Posted November 6, 2018 Posted November 6, 2018 work, you, the Lord, and your shit... seems to make sense somehow... i think i get it
Bouvre Posted November 6, 2018 Posted November 6, 2018 1 hour ago, fuggstop said: On the toilet, as i snooze Again the coffee has made me poop Hoping no one hears me shoot On my lunch but cant get no food Stupid coffee, im its fool Lord make it easy, make it loose So i wont get back late too! As stated from the beginning of this absolutely transcendent poem by Fuggs, the events unfold from the beginning in a dream-like state, an introduction that hearkens to poets such as Blake and Poe; yet the language is grounded, simple, and even profane, which--with its insults like "stupid"-- demonstrates a tribute to Catullus. And its several turns, from cursing the coffee to the speaker turning their voice heavenward happen so quickly on the line and in the language. Such a visceral moment parallels the shifts in tone and mood that often accompany a bowel movement. That the poem is also written, as we're told, from the toilet, during lunch, we can only further see a quickness and impulsive free-writing that owes much to O'Hara and his iconic collection, "Lunch Poems" Some might be turned away from this style, given that its lack of punctuation can lead to multiple readings (is the speaker "shooting on their lunch" or "shooting during lunch?") but I argue such questions and confusion only speak to the condition in which the poem is written, and such a flaw adds to the humanity of Fugg's poetry. It's all quite marvelous, really. 1 2
Vamped Posted November 6, 2018 Posted November 6, 2018 Never poop on break. Always poop on the clock! 1 2
Bouvre Posted November 6, 2018 Posted November 6, 2018 1 minute ago, Vamped said: Never poop on break. Always poop on the clock! Important PSA. (Pooping Service Announcement.) 2
fuggstop Posted November 6, 2018 Author Posted November 6, 2018 18 minutes ago, Bouvre said: As stated from the beginning of this absolutely transcendent poem by Fuggs, the events unfold from the beginning in a dream-like state, an introduction that hearkens to poets such as Blake and Poe; yet the language is grounded, simple, and even profane, which--with its insults like "stupid"-- demonstrates a tribute to Catullus. And its several turns, from cursing the coffee to the speaker turning their voice heavenward happen so quickly on the line and in the language. Such a visceral moment parallels the shifts in tone and mood that often accompany a bowel movement. That the poem is also written, as we're told, from the toilet, during lunch, we can only further see a quickness and impulsive free-writing that owes much to O'Hara and his iconic collection, "Lunch Poems" Some might be turned away from this style, given that its lack of punctuation can lead to multiple readings (is the speaker "shooting on their lunch" or "shooting during lunch?") but I argue such questions and confusion only speak to the condition in which the poem is written, and such a flaw adds to the humanity of Fugg's poetry. It's all quite marvelous, really. LOLOL you are so awesome! 1
fuggstop Posted November 6, 2018 Author Posted November 6, 2018 4 minutes ago, Vamped said: Never poop on break. Always poop on the clock! I know i know. But then i have to let my supervisor and the control board know im pooping which i did one day last week. Dont wanna make it a thing lol
Bouvre Posted November 6, 2018 Posted November 6, 2018 1 minute ago, fuggstop said: LOLOL you are so awesome! <3 Gotta put all that studying poetry to use somehow. 1
CAC Posted November 7, 2018 Posted November 7, 2018 6 hours ago, Vamped said: Never poop on break. Always poop on the clock! yes, get paid for that 20 minutes, make the best of a shitty situation.... >_>
Vamped Posted November 7, 2018 Posted November 7, 2018 7 hours ago, fuggstop said: I know i know. But then i have to let my supervisor and the control board know im pooping which i did one day last week. Dont wanna make it a thing lol Id just put it in my signature Gone pooping. Warm regards, Vamped (Contact information) 1
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