PhilosipherStoned Posted May 2, 2017 Share Posted May 2, 2017 I think it's almost done. Yo my flow is so damn cold it froze up in the middle, but the cycle must continue despite ya growin' nipples. Time ta take this thing a hundred eighty three degrees below zero like starrin' in the eyes of ya fallen boy Jinno before ya slice 'im up because you gotta be the hero.. positive distractions are a must when you reflect on life an' spntaneously combust; into flames that erupt; engulf what you once were; you hate it but you want more like; icy cold lenemode; no limits; no criminals; no civics; broke physics; no quittin; no givin' up; he said it's simple as ABA; until I switched it up and hit 'em with some ABBA- BBA; that's my unique flow; from my unique soul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bouvre Posted May 2, 2017 Share Posted May 2, 2017 It's almost a sonnet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarPanda Posted May 2, 2017 Share Posted May 2, 2017 Tight tight tight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhilosipherStoned Posted May 3, 2017 Author Share Posted May 3, 2017 It's almost a sonnet. Maybe I should actually try to write one of those. Sticking to iambic pentameter is hard.. I stopped the first verse for this rap at 16 lines so I think I should probably keep going with this one until 16. Not sure what to write next though. I want it to end playing one the name of the beat "Vicious Circle" so I can through some afro samurai dialogue in, and maybe some Mace Windu. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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