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I guess I should work on this track..


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The sucky part about making rap is usually by the time you have good material and a solid idea on

how you're gonna make the beat a song you're already so sick of the beat and your lyrics it's hard to

have fun with it.  :| I've already halfway wrote like 5 or 6 songs just fucking around in the same amount

of time I've spent trying to think this one out.

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NAh it was made for this beat.. and it seems to work it's just..eminemish or something..

My timing can be perfect but if my tone is wrong or I don't enunciate one word right it

throws the whole shit off, and it's honestly pretty simple in design I can't believe I'm

taking so long with this I need to finish tonight so I can dedicate myself to something

fresh..

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Plus the beat isn't that great, but I bought it from the dj to use so I need to use it.. It sounds good.

and I don't mind supporting this guy even if I'm feeling different style beats, or it's hard to put lyrics

on his stuff he has a clean style.. I'm just in the mood for a head bobber, and this is a loop hacker type

beat. My loop hacking skills could use a bit of touching up.

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he has a shadow for a smile

that was worth my while

 

our embraces and the fragrance

of his fabrics

 

but i know

i can be sporadic

 

and if any other girl were ever grazed by his smile

it's because i made it worth his while

 

 

one half of your face looks like a dood and the other half looks like a chick... im cooonfuuusssed

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I take a few, but believe it or not english isnt pink guys first language, and I happen to be culturly diverse enough

to take the subtle hints in his music for what they really are..  How else can I put this the pink guy is honestly part

of the reason I havent commited fully to what I want to do yet.. Everything produced by me even shit I've worked

on for while I present as more or less a sarcastic expiriment so whatevah.  :|

 

Anybody that might be implying some dumb shit that they are too pussy to imply directly should also be able

to imply how much I care about their thoughts, and opinions from that statement alone, and if not they can

literally suck my dick it would be a great way to persuade me to be simpathetic to their cause.. not that I would...

be sympathetic to their cause just cuz that, but I might.  :|

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You need to take cues from Pink Guy.

I take a few, but believe it or not english isnt pink guys first language, and I happen to be culturly diverse enough

to take the subtle hints in his music for what they really are..  How else can I put this the pink guy is honestly part

of the reason I havent commited fully to what I want to do yet.. Everything produced by me even shit I've worked

on for while I present as more or less a sarcastic expiriment so whatevah.  :|

 

Anybody that might be implying some dumb shit that they are too pussy to imply directly should also be able

to imply how much I care about their thoughts, and opinions from that statement alone, and if not they can

literally suck my dick it would be a great way to persuade me to be simpathetic to their cause.. not that I would...

be sympathetic to their cause just cuz that, but I might.  :|

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I take a few, but believe it or not english isnt pink guys first language, and I happen to be culturly diverse enough

to take the subtle hints in his music for what they really are..  How else can I put this the pink guy is honestly part

of the reason I havent commited fully to what I want to do yet.. Everything produced by me even shit I've worked

on for while I present as more or less a sarcastic expiriments so whatevah.  :|

 

Anybody that might be implying some dumb shit that they are too pussy to imply directly should also be able

to imply how much I care about their thoughts, and opinions from that statement alone, and if not they can

literally suck my dick it would be a great way to persuade me to be simpathetic to their cause.. not that I would...

be sympathetic to their cause just cuz that, but I might.  :|

 

Seriously, what the hell? It was a little jab. :it:

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I'm just saying that's how I feel about the matter. No need to take it to heart.  :it:

 

Um, I'm not the one who wrote a long message making it seem I took it to heart. Take a grain of your own advice you implied and tell me to fuck off.

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