http://unevenedge.com/index.php?action=fanfics;sa=story;id=7
just enjoy it. its not meant be graded or become the WORLDS BEST SEX SCENE EVAR ..so dont even start that mess.
i wrote a particular sex act into it ive never written before - that was ... unexpected. The guy was surprised, too. Everybody was suprised lol.
Now i know most of you are gay and I probably should write a gay one but Id probably fuck up a gay scene horribly because ive never had gay sex. I write what ive mostly experienced myself..Is that gross? . so yeah - um anyway. feedback is appreciated but dont be an asshole.
stilgar and buddy are ignored and their comments, if made, will not be read. can i ask a favor? It took me like 3 or 4 days to write this..so just do me a favor and dont quote those two either.. kthxbai
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