blueraven1999

Ahiru no Sora 7

I definitely found the spelling errors distracting but my point is that since it's just a hobby for him, he probably doesn't care. Even without a editing tool if he had a friend or family member go over his script to check for typos and grammar mistakes, it would help a lot.

Food Wars: The Fourth Place ep 3. That announcer was annoying. Nyan girl is too. I don't like both of them.

I'd go see it in the theater if it had 2D animation. It's too bad it doesn't.

Pretty sure he said once that he's just doing it as a hobby. I'd still say he needs spell check more than anything else. The editing app does sound like a good idea though.

Ghosttrek: You'd be better off sitting down in your videos. The top of your head is cut off and that way you wouldn't sway. It would look more professional. Bigger font would help and less info on screen. It was a wall of text that's hard to read. Also you spelled first, living, because, and psychologically wrong. Should have been get fined not get fine. I know this is nitpicking but 11 year old child should have hyphens so it should be 11-year-old child. Guardian, accidentally, and meant is also spelled wrong. G-rated would look better than g rated. You had to a's in Can a a review when it should have been one. Should have been "Can a franchise start out instead of Can a Franchise started out. I'm not going to go over every spelling mistake (there's too many) but spellchecker is your friend. You should use it.

I'm pretty sure I read in one of his messages here once that he doesn't know how to edit. However that was from a year or so ago so he might have learned since then. I doubt it though.

Happy birthday helpme and viperxmns!