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16 bars Version 2.0


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sixteen bars; part two of the practice

im on a new beat but this the same old; rap shit;

communist or facist; whatever I'm past it,

craving some action cuz I need to get past this

stack them bars and let the beat keep blastin'

grit yo teeth if you really think you have ta

Complete that speech we don't need anotha actor

on the big screens with their dinky ass chatter

and machined ass beats time to clean the miasma;

word; man it's only one verse, what's it really worth

You ain't a saint; you aint a monk; you wont save the earth;

but the more absurd your wording is the more it seems to work

blah blah blah, blah blah blah man all I see is dirt.

This a simple sixteen but I bet I used more words

then those lames; wont mention names but I think one rhymes with snake,

All those Lil blanks are just as jaded as their listeners are faded shit is jank.

Done enough fuck it. Just a writing exercise for ya.  :|

 

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I'd say to move this to the music folder, but I don't know. I wanna start doing a 16 bars thread daily,

mainly because when I first started rap I was all about the metrics, ofcourse that shit gets so tired.

When rapping it gets easier and easier to sense the bpm and make bars that are all kinds of speed

and end where you need to.. Kind of like a 'Back to Basics' class for me I guess.

 

I'll even rap to beats you suggest just post and I'll type it out..even record if you want. I have the technology.

Why not use it..  :|

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